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M.A. Kunilovskaya
Tyumen State University N.L. Morgoun
Moscow State University
GAINS AND PITFALLS OF SENTENCE-SPLITTING IN TRANSLATION
The article seeks to draw attention to issue of text cohesion in student translations. It is approached with regard to sentence splitting, a technique to be used to dispense with structural complexity of texts and to enhance their readability and conformity to target language text-generating conventions. Based on a parallel learner translator corpus, this research is centered at conformities and, more notably, translation mistakes associated with splitting. It shows that splitting is more reasonable with coordinated structures, while, when applied to subordinating relations, it requires thorough analyses and careful structuring of both the sentence in question and subsequent discourse. In English-Russian translation coordination effected by "and" and non-restrictive relative clauses prove to be the "most common suspects" when it comes to splitting. Mistakes analysis shows that disregard to, or inability to interpret semantic relations of the original while splitting result in incoherent discourse, as does failure to adjust informative structure of the newly coined sentence sequence to the structural context. There are also contexts in which splitting is usually avoided for pragmatic reasons.
Keywords: sentence splitting, cohesion, discourse relations, translator training, RusLTC
1. Introduction: Motivation, Research Data and Goals
In our experience of translator training, one of the major problems is lack of textual cohesion in translations. The situation comes as no surprise as students are mostly trained to avoid mistakes at the lexical and grammatical levels including syntax that does not extend, though, beyond sentence boundaries. At the same time the ultimate objective of translation is a text, or rather a discourse; and it is cohesion that defines a text as text. The strong connection between the quality of cohesive ties in target texts and overall quality of translation has been repeatedly stressed in Translation Studies [1]. Most mistakes in text structure are down to the tendency for students to ignore textual features of the source and to translate at best at sentence level. As a result the target text lacks texuality or texture defined by Halliday and Hasan with reference to relations that obtain across sentence boundaries [2, p. 4]. In student translations sentence sequences are often autonomous disconnected sentences rather than coherent discourse.
This article focuses on a different source of "cohesion mistakes" in translation, namely those that are associated with sentence-splitting (or diffusion) in translation. For the purposes of the present study we define it as change of
sentence boundaries, i.e. rendering of one sentence with two or more. By a sentence here we mean a formal graphical sentence running from a capital letter to a full stop and set off by spaces.
The said translational technique sprang to our eye in connection with Russian Learner Translator Corpus (http://www.rus-ltc.org/), which we are currently developping and use as the basis for this research. It is an on-line parallel corpus of student translations in a variety of text types. Its English-Russian subcorpus contains 164 English non-fiction source texts (230966 word tokens, 13353 sentence-segments) and their respective multiple translations of the total number of 700 texts (409415 word tokens). The Corpus compilation requires manual correction of automatic alignment, which is by default adjusted to segment texts at sentence level. The correction mainly consists in splitting and joining segments, whenever translators chose to deviate from the general strategy of rendering one source sentence with one target sentence. The statistics for splitting sentences in the Corpus informs that this transformation is employed in translation of about 3 % of source sentence-segments. It is important to mention that for technical reasons we do not take into account cases of internal shifts in sentence structure embracing translations in which original semi-composite sentences are rendered as compound or complex sentences, i.e. when there is a change in the number of well-formed predicative lines, but there is no change in the formal number of sentences in the text. Similarly, we disregard the opposite technique to join sentences in translation.
Our research is based on the semantic and pragmatic contextual analysis of 250 examples which were randomly selected from the total of 386 English sentences that were split in their Russian translations and automatically retrieved from the Corpus. The said research data was filtered to exclude both parsing mistakes and translations which reveal total lack of understanding of the source referents on the part of the translator, i.e. translations which can not be analyzed in terms of semantic or pragmatic aspects of text structure as they represent the so called "word salad". It is important that the Corpus makes it possible to review contexts for both source and target segments and we relied on full texts in our analysis.
This paper aims to describe types of syntactic structures that undergo splitting, along with their semantic and pragmatic properties, typical motivations and results of this shift in English-to-Russian translation. We will give an overview of typical semantic and pragmatic pitfalls of this shift and will attempt to define conditions under which sentence-splitting is motivated, and when it is potentially threatening to text cohesion and coherence.
2. Why Sentences Get Split in Translation
Despite our headline we do not argue that sentence splitting is to be avoided. In a variety of contexts it seems quite reasonable. In fact our statistics shows that in 65 % of cases from our data sentence splitting has done no harm to overall translation quality.
It does not come as a surprise that the vast majority of sentences that undergo splitting in translation are structurally very complicated. Most of the complexity done away with in translations arises from composite sentences, which include coordinated parts of various structure. Most of them include compound or complex sentences conjoined with the help of coordinating conjunctions (in a descending frequency order) "and", "but", "so", "while", "for", "yet", "although", "whereas", "or", as well as combinations of "and" with the said conjunctions. This group of sentences is extended to include 34 examples of asyndeton formally marked by either a semi-colon or a comma. All together they account for almost half of our sample (47 %; 117 out of 250), including 56 cases of interclausal "and" (22 %) - the most frequent coordinator.
(1) Several of our research discoveries have been adapted for commercial use, and one particular breakthrough in linear hydraulics is now being used in every oil company in the country1.
It seems that the belief that a sentence which opens with "And" is stylistically flawed in English still holds because they prefer to join sentences with ", and" rather than put a full stop when they have to show that the propositions are connected. Our Corpus (not just the sample!) contains only 38 examples of sentences with "And" in the absolute beginning, which compares unfavorably with the 56 cases of interclausal "and" mentioned above in just our sample. The Russian language is less opposed to sentence sequences in this case, and therefore, splitting is quite justified, especially taking into account that English "and" signals exclusively coordinative discourse relations at the pragmatic level [3, p. 598].
Semantically "and"-introduced connection between sentences can vary from simple addition to the meanings of successive elements in narration, simultaneity and contrast (see dictionary meanings at http://www.thefreedictionary.com/AND), and sometimes translators choose to make these meanings explicit. This trend is especially typical with "and" expressing contrast, consequence and conditional result or the meaning of a succession of events:
(2) Source Target
They are perhaps, being accused of Например, их обвиняют в правона-
wrong-doing, their lives are falling рушении, их жизнь рушится.
apart and it should be no surprise Поэтому никого не должно
if the media is often blamed for this удивлять то, что они часто
(causative-consecutive meaning). обвиняют в этом СМИ.
1 All examples are quoted as they are present in the Corpus; and we ignore all mistakes unrelated to sentence splitting.
(3) Though there is no safe harbor, Хотя у них и нет надежного they have eluded the cops, and убежища, но все-таки им удалось survived the clap of despair, and ускользнуть от полиции и пережить they go anew and undaunted отчаяние. И, несмотря ни на что, (narration; ~ afterwards, then). они идут вперед уверенные и
бесстрашные.
(4) Between the end of 1995 and mid- В период с конца 1995 до середины 1997 L'Oreal shares rose 1997 акции «Лориаль» значительно substantially and then fell back to выросли в цене. А к концу 2007 finish 1997 at 2400 francs опустились до 2400 франков. (contrast).
In most cases, however, interclausal "and" is altogether dropped in the Russian translation. Simple juxtaposition of two sentences, given their semantic connectedness, seems to be Russian functional equivalent to the English "and" used in its most general and frequent, almost "text-grammatical" meaning of combining ideas (32 out of 56 cases; 57 % of all and-coordinated structures or 13 % of the whole sample). These cases certainly include most cases when "and" is used in combination with another coordinating conjunction. The meaning of the latter is usually retained in the translation, while "and" is not rendered:
(5) Source Target
Heartsome is a powerful tool Харсам же имеет привлекательную цену at an attractive price, and it's, и довольно многофункционален. Судя по in my experience, the best of опыту, я бы сказал, что это самый the commercial TenTs. удачный ПР.
In fact, all means of expressing coordination are used to model the topic of discourse: they either mark topic framing/introduction, topic shifts, topic continuation or topic closure. The range and scope of these sequential discourse markers differ in the two languages under study in that the Russian language more often relies on juxtaposition of sentences for topic continuation, for one. There seems to be comparatively few semantic or pragmatic mistakes related to this type of sentence splitting. On the other hand, translators tend to retain markers of more dramatic discourse markers such as shift of topic and topic closure even if they choose to split the original sentence (this is to be cross-checked on the data from parallel corpora of professional translations for individual text types and genres). Most of the mistakes here arise from misinterpretation of type of sequential relations signaled by original markers or the scope of their operation (see (16, 17) in part 3 below).
Apart from sentences with coordination, splitting can result in upgrading of a clause, phrase or verbal or nominative construction to a separate sentence.
In our sample the parts of the sentence that get upgraded are (in the frequency order):
1. dependent clauses in a variety of functions (18 % of the sample), most commonly - non-defining relative clauses (18 out of 44 cases);
2. various verbal constructions, most commonly participial, and absolute nominative constructions (12 %);
3. appositives, most often set off by dashes (8 %);
4. homogeneous members, mostly predicates (7 %);
5. prepositional nominative phrases, typically with adverbial functions (4 %);
6. coordinated clauses introduced into the matrix structure with a colon (4 %). Sentence-splitting is a typical resort whenever translators deal with extended
sentences, i.e. sentences overloaded with dependent elements. Thus, this transformation can be used to make semantic and pragmatic relations between ideas more explicit (or interpreted, for that matter). In (6) the information from the participial construction in adverbial function is rendered as a consequence, while in (7) "and" in its consecutive manifestation has got a more explicit reading of result pragmatically functioning as elaboration (we have added some context to be persuasive).
(6) Source Target
Another situation, that cannot Другая ситуация, которая не может occur in a parliament, arises возникнуть в британском парламенте, -
это избрание президента, относящегося к одной партии, а Конгресса - к другой. В итоге, исполнительный и законодательный органы власти автоматически
противопоставляются друг другу.
(7) Many young and inexperienced В персональном интервью такой подход
не всегда продуктивен. Бывали случаи, когда даже первоклассные
профессионалы, включая Сэра Робина Дэя, теряли своих собеседников, которые не выдерживали столь напористой манеры беседы и прекращали интервью.
when the people choose a President of one party and a Congress of another, putting the executive and the legislative branches automatically in opposition to each other. Many young and inexperienced reporters fall into the trap of believing that a research interview is the same as the performance and that a hectoring, intrusive manner is required. This is likely to lose you the interviewee very quickly and will certainly not encourage them to tell you anything useful. Even as a performance it is not always productive and several top-notch professionals,
including Sir Robin Day, have had interviewees walk out on them.
Cohesion is largely achieved through restoring the "missing" parts of the original sentence element. The restored parts usually carry words which co-refer to objects belonging to the text topic domain as well as demonstrative pronouns anaphorically anchored in the previous text: (8) Source
To the agricultural economists, however, nutrition was more than a science of diet; it was a signpost pointing the way to an economy of abundance
(9) Michael Elphick, for instance, starred in the TV series Harry as the eponymous freelance reporter who seems to have no real redeeming features at all.
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Однако, согласно точке зрения экономистов по сельскому хозяйству, рациональное питание стало чем-то большим, чем просто наукой о режиме питания. Рациональное питание - это еще и своеобразный способ достижения экономики изобилия.
Майкл Элфик, к примеру, сыграл главную роль фрилансера Гарри в одноимённом сериале. Кажется, что у его героя вообще нет положительных черт.
It is particularly typical for relative clauses upgraded to separate sentences (10d). Concerning relative clauses, it sprang to our eye that translators regularly resort to splitting when dealing with them, notably, non-descriptive ones. It seem that the Russian language does not favour jamming relatively independent additional information into the sentence structure, and therefore, this type of splitting can be typologically justified, especially if the information from the relative clause is continued in the text (10 a to d) below. Although it can be argued that the example in (10b) looks somewhat chopped, and in (10c) the semantic relations between propositions involved in the target, differ from how they are arranged in the source text, on the whole a separate sentence instead of a relative clause is possible. (10 a) Source
Even if dumping weedkiller on the crops ofpeasant farmers quadruples the local price of coca leaves, this tends to have little impact on the street price, which is set mainly by the risk of getting cocaine into Europe or the United States. Nowadays the drug warriors claim to seize close to half of all the cocaine that is produced. The
Target
Даже если используется гербицид для уничтожения коковых полей и падает цена на коковые листья, это оказывает незначительное влияние на уличную цену. Она зависит от риска доставки кокаина в Европу и США.
(10 b)
street price in the United States does seem to have risen, and the purity seems to have fallen, over the past year.
Gesparel is itself jointly owned by Nestle which has 49% of the capital, and Mrs Bettencourt and her family who have a majority stake of 51 %.
(10 c)
But the budding entrepreneur is more likely to be an outsider, a troublemaker, a rebel, who drops out of college to get a job, discovers a flair for building companies from nothing, gets bored quickly and moves on.
Gesparel, в свою очередь, принадлежит компании Nestle. Она является обладателем 49 % пакета. Контрольный пакет акций, в размере 51 %, принадлежит г-же Бетанкур и ее семье.
Успешным предпринимателем с большей долей вероятности может стать нарушитель спокойствия, бросивший колледж ради поисков работы. Открыв в себе склонность к предпринимательству, он создает бизнес на пустом месте и развивает его, когда становится скучно работать в прежних условиях. Один из его любимых - количество проданных предметов мужского нижнего белья. Объем продаж мужских трусов обычно постоянен, а в период рецессии при отсутствии необходимости покупать новые часто резко сокращается.
While upgrading appositives they often use particles and demonstrative pronouns as cohesive means that prevent text from falling apart. Particles in general are a specific Russian cohesive device and they often appear in split sentences: (11) Source
By some miracle, the view north from Hopper's house has barely changed in all that time - a subversively unassuming expanse of hills and a sea-glazed sky.
(10 d)
One favourite, supposedly, was sales of men's underwear, which are usually pretty constant, but
drop in recessions when men replace them less often.
Target
Каким-то чудом вид к северу от домика практически не изменился. Все тот же скромный простор холмов и небо цвета морской лагуны.
Splitting can also be used to signal discourse relations between bits of information explicitly, which results in a better structured text:
(12) Source Target
If you thought reptiles were some Возможно, до сих пор вы считали, of the least intelligent creatures in что рептилии - далеко не самые the animal kingdom, well, you разумные существа в животном might want to reconsider. мире. Что ж, прочитав эту
статью, вы, скорее всего, измените свою точку зрения.
(13) As for China's being too poor to Что же касается того, что Китай afford democracy, today it is as слишком беден для демократии, на well off as some of the world's сегодняшний день у Китая куда poorest democracies were a больше средств, чем четверть века quarter century ago, with high life назад было у некоторых пусть expectancy and levels of literacy. бедных, но все же демократических
государств. К тому же, в Китае отмечается высокая продолжительность жизни и высокий уровень грамотности населения. The analysis of our data shows that splitting does not only help to dispense with verbal constructions, some types of which are non-existent in Russian, and to adjust to other stylistic and interlingual typological differences, but it also helps to improve coherence and cohesion of the text streamlining its structure.
3. Typical Cohesion and Coherence Mistakes Arising from Sentence Splitting
On the other hand splitting is associated with a number of mistakes in translation, affecting the semantics and pragmatics of discourse and resulting in less readable or intelligible texts. Semantics of discourse, broadly speaking, is logical relations between propositions based on their meanings, while by pragmatics we mean types of discourse relations established between propositions in the text. Following the SDRT (Segmented Discourse Representation Theory), discourse relations show "the relevance of each single segment within the discourse structure, and by contributing their various semantics to discourse content, they make explicit the specific communication intention apparently motivating the utterance of each such segment" [4, p. 39]. We do not argue that sentence splitting is the only cause of coherence and cohesion problems in student translations, but there are clear indications that this shift can provoke incoherence and non-sense in translations. It is also true that these mistakes can be defined as lack of agreement (or even contradiction) between the explicit signals of text
structure and text semantics, or more commonly lack of clues as to the role of the new sentence in the discourse.
When the translator chooses to split sentences he or she can't but make sure that the newly-coined sequence of sentences hangs together both structurally and semantically. The new sentence should be adopted to the flow of information from the previous sentence to the subsequent sentence in terms of theme-and-rheme ties. Failure to establish these connection results in somewhat less connected discourse and loss of (or vague) connection between the upgraded part and its matrix structure as well as the subsequent text. In (14) the non-defining relative clause that provides explanation to the statement in the main clause is shifted to paratactic position but the offered theme and rheme structure does not put the reason for devastating effect of glaucoma in the elderly in the focus of the new sentence. (14) Source Target
Depression afflicts people of Депрессия причиняет страдания людям
all ages, but it can be particularly devastating for older people, who are less likely to seek treatment and more likely to commit suicide than younger adults similarly afflicted.
(15) Most likely to be used to research a feature or personal profile, it is certainly used to really get under the skin of the interviewee.
(16) There are several different types of research interview used by reporters.
1) The one-to-one short interview. Short
conversations with police officers, emergency workers and plant operatives. None of these are long (the interviewees are too busy for long conversations) and they are focused on specifics, but
любого возраста, но особенно такое состояние губительно для пожилых людей. Намного меньше вероятность, что они обратятся за медицинской помощью, и намного больше вероятность совершения ими самоубийства, по сравнению с молодыми людьми в подобном состоянии. Чаще всего такой вид интервью используют для того, чтобы показать, что представляет собой собеседник, выявить его характерные черты. Часто в биографическом интервью журналисты лезут собеседнику под кожу.
Такой разговор длится недолго (интервьюируемые слишком заняты, чтобы вести длинные беседы) и сосредоточен на аспектах работы собеседника. С помощью такого
they can still be useful for комментария журналист приводит pointing up issues and заключения экспертов и придаёт adding colour. тексту насыщенность.
Another concern that is associated with splitting is the necessity to specify semantic relations between propositions. It is not necessarily achieved by overt conjunctive elements - if well structured, relations between sentences can be clear from their semantic structure. But intended non-default interpretations benefit if they are explicitly marked. Our data show that contrast is one important coordinative relation, and if it is overlooked in translation it usually tells on text coherence. In (15) above the translator ignored the relations of contrast between the detached infinitive construction of purpose and the main clause having substituted them for relations of simple combination or addition of information by simply juxtaposing the two propositions. The resulting sequence of sentences is rather a set of autonomous facts than a purposeful discourse. Similarly in (16) loss of contrast relations results in incoherence of the two sentences. In (17) the propositions "governments tax and regulate" and "governments use the funds" form a consequence, where the latter is the result of the former. In the translation, however, this consecutive meaning of "and" is interpreted as simple addition signaled by the conjunctive adverb «также».
(17) Source Target
Governments would tax and regulate Правительство могло бы the drug trade, and use the funds облагать налогом и контро-raised (and the billions saved on лировать торговлю наркоти-law-enforcement) to educate the ками. Также можно было бы, public about the risks of drug- используя собранные средства taking and to treat addiction. (и миллиарды, сэкономленные на
финансировании правоохранительных органов), предупреждать население о вреде употребления наркотиков и лечить от зависимости.
Introduction of a new proposition into the discourse structure means that there appears a new rheme, a new focus of attention. It can affect topic development in discourse and distract the reader's attention from the main idea. In (18) the new sentence hampers text cohesion as it stands out from the context as disconnected, interrupting the train of thought and disrupting the logic of the text. It is especially obvious, if we add the previous and subsequent elements of discourse:
(18) Source Target
First comes spreading prosperity. Then В прошлом году Европа не representative government replaces применяла высшую меру tyranny. Finally, notions of human rights, наказания. И этот год стал
social justice and the fallibility of the для европейцев историчес-state extend even to death row, and the ким событием. judicial terror of capital punishment is ditched.
Last year was the first in Europe's recorded history in which not one person was executed.
On the face of it Asia stacks up not at all well against this achievement. The region accounts for just over half the world's population. Prosperity has spread, and representative government. But in its application of the death penalty, Asia leads the world.
It turns out that the sentence in italics highlights that Europe has reached a certain stage in its development which is marked but the death penalty ban. The subsequent discourse contrasts this situation to Asian. The new sentence in translation unnecessarily shifts reader's attention from the achievement itself (no death penalty) to the attitude of the Europeans to this fact (absent in the original!). Similar incoherence of discourse can be seen in (19). The prepositional nominative phrase, marking the exception from the general rule, is upgraded to a separate sentence and appended to what has been the main clause in the original. The new sentence, unlike its reduced version, gets the theme and rheme structure of its own, which focuses the reader's attention on the car makes that are labeled "the few exceptions". It is natural that the reader would expect continuation of this rheme, but it does not happen in the text. (19) Source Target
Mass-market cars may be Автомобили, которые изготавливаются democratic, but with a few для широкого потребления, могут быть shining exceptions (the Mini; вполне доступными и демократичными, the Fiat 500; the Volkswagen но большинство из них способны 'Beetle') - the vast majority вдохновить своего владельца не больше, are about as inspiring as a чем посудомоечная машина. Но, тем не dishwasher. менее, есть несколько ярких исклю-
чений, например, так называемые мини автомобили или Fiat 500 или Volkswagen 'Beetle'. Order of the propositions is also crucial for maintaining text cohesion. In the next example (20) a dependent clause of concession (Although that hope is still unrealized), which takes up the information of the previous sentence (fervently
wished) in translation, is upgraded and moved to the end of the segment. It leads to somewhat erratic discourse structure, provided that the subsequent discourse is anaphorically attached to the main clause of the original.
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Около 6 000 убежденных эсперантистов - больше, чем когда-либо -съедутся на этой неделе в Варшаву со всего мира, даже из таких отдаленных уголков планеты, как Япония и Бразилия, чтобы почтить память Заменгофа и отпраздновать столетие созданного им языка. Однако его желание так и не осуществилось.
(20) Source Zamenhof fervently wished that his invented tongue would become the world's second language.
Although that hope is still unrealized, nearly 6.000 zealous Esperantists - the largest gathering ever - from as far away as Japan and Brazil are in Warsaw this week to honor Zamenhof on the occasion of the 100th birthday of his language. They are doing so with a variety of events, all in Esperanto.
Speaking of anaphor resolution, it is worth mentioning that splitting sometimes leads to uncertainty in discourse interpretation, because the reader is not provided with the clues as to where to attach the next sentence in the structure. For example, in (21) the predicate involves wider social costs covers social consequences of addiction, other than dysfunctional families, but in the discourse hierarchy offered in translation it is the family problems that threaten the well-being of society. The reader encounters even greater problems trying to infer the appropriate attachment point for «они» from the sentence following the one that happen to be split in translation in (22).
(21) Source But addiction can also inflict misery on the families and especially the children of any addict, and involves wider social costs.
(22) Researchers questioned 1,068 adults about their levels of happiness and anxiety, their physical health and their eating and sleeping habits in an online survey. They found that "morning people" were out of bed by 6.58 am on average, while "eve-
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Но зависимость также может принести несчастье в семьи, особенно детям наркозависимых. Это приведет к социальным проблемам.
Исследователи опросили 1068 взрослых через Интернет. Опрос содержал вопросы, касающиеся степени удовлетворенности жизнью, тревожности, физического здоровья, привычек в еде и режима сна респондентов. Они
ningpeople" waited until 8.54 am to start their day.
обнаружили, что «жаворонки» в среднем встают в 6.48, в то время как «совы» начинают свой день в 8.54.
While splitting sentences it is important to take into account the subsequent discourse. This shift might have been a great solution to render the original defining clause of the text opening sentence in (23) where it bridges to the purpose of the text - a review of a movie starring Charlie Chaplin. But the translator misses this pragmatic role of this structure and comes up with a sentence which is not centered on the idea of renewed interest to Chaplin (upheld in subsequent current torrid spell), but rather on its standing value.
(23) Source Target
Only those who reach for their gun Чарли Чаплина могут не любить when they hear the word "culture" (like the late critic, Herr Dr. Joseph Gobbels) can dislike Charlie Chaplin whose works are enjoying a revival in New York today. I took the occasion in the current torrid spell to re-see his "Modern Times".
One more pragmatic pitfall of splitting consists in erroneous rendering of semantic relations between propositions as a pragmatic relation. For example, in
(24) causative-consecutive semantics of relations in the last part of the segment is substituted for discourse relations of conclusion made on the part of the author. It might not be very dramatic in some texts , but not others.
(24) Source Target
Turning up late implies that Опоздание означает, что Вы считаете
себя более важным человеком, чем
только те люди которые, услышав слово «культура» тянутся к оружию (например, покойный доктор Йозеф Геббельс). Работами Чарли Чаплина наслаждаются в Нью-Йорке и по сей день.
you think yourself more important than the interviewee, and that they are not deserving of respect and so is not likely to improve your chances of a good story.
интервьюируемый, и что он не заслуживает Вашего уважения. Таким образом, Ваши шансы услышать от собеседника обстоятельный рассказ уменьшаются.
Though it is hard to generalize on the types of content or cohesion errors found in translations involving splitting due to the interpreting issues and interplay of other factors leading to mistakes, we are positive that splitting can be potentially dangerous on three counts. It can be effected with disregard to semantic relations between propositions or elements involved (15, 16) or misinterpretation of the former (17), including erroneous rendering of semantic connections between proposition by the
means of pragmatic level (24), for one. Secondly, as this shift requires introduction of a separate sentence, there are problems with its theme and rheme structure (14) and other aspects of its integration into the discourse structure into discourse (20, 23, 24). The discourse structure damage to the target is also associated with anaphor resolution which can arise from careless splitting (21, 22). And finally, there is the effect of a greater communicative value acquired by upgraded sentences which harms the natural flow of information in the text (18, 19). It is especially dangerous when the information from the element-to-be-a-sentence is not taken on in the subsequent discourse.
4. Conclusion and Outlook
Sentence splitting is a translational technique which consists in shifting a clause or phrase to sentence level. In this study we have given the general overview of syntactic conditions under which splitting in English-to-Russian translation is most common. In our sample almost half of all "splits" affect coordinative relations, with the most typical coordinator "and" dispensed with in Russian translation. This seems to be conformity to be tested on a corpus of professional translations. In this regard it can also be prospected to study the range and types of discourse markers of continuation in English and Russian. Among subordinate relations relative clauses stand out as one structural context typical for splitting, and quite justified, too. The limitations and outcomes of this shift require more detailed analysis. The same is true for other typologically justified structural conditions for splitting - verbal and nominative constructions, as well as appositives, which were, but mentioned in this research. The most dangerous mistakes associated with splitting and its side-effects all result in less coherent discourse and include loss or misinterpretation of semantic ties between propositions, changes to the pragmatic status of the upgraded proposition and negative effects on the text information structure.
To sum it up, splitting can be well-motivated by typological contrasts between languages or by contextual conditions. It requires adjustments to and in the structure of the subsequent discourse elements and sometimes entails interruption of the flow of information in the text. The key to a semantically and pragmatically sound translation is to ensure coherence in the target text; to mark the important cohesive ties, especially if the semantics of the target text and presupposition allow multiple interpretations; and to signal discourse relations between parts, i.e. the way the information is packaged into the discourse structure.
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М.А. Куниловская, Н.Л. Моргун
О ПОЛЬЗЕ И ВРЕДЕ ФРАЗОВОГО ЧЛЕНЕНИЯ ПРИ ПИСЬМЕННОМ ПЕРЕВОДЕ
В статье поднимается проблема связности студенческих текстов переводов. Данная проблема рассматривается в связи с приемом фразового членения, который призван устранить структурную сложность, облегчить восприятие текства и привести синтаксис в соответствии с языковыми конвенциями языка перевода. Исследование основано на материалах параллельного корпуса несовершенных переводов и сфокусировано на соответствиях и, что более значимо, переводческих ошибках, вызванных фразовым членением. Показано, что членение более оправдано при переводе фраз с сочинительной связью, тогда как членение фраз с подчинительной связью требует тщательного анализа и особого внимания при построении перевода текущей и последующих фраз. При выполнении перевода с английского языка на русский членение наиболее уместно во фразах с сочинительным союзом «и», а также неограничительными определительными придаточными. Анализ ошибок в студенческих переводах показывает, что пренебрежение к семантическим отношениям исходной фразы или неспособность раскрыть их приводит к нарушению связности текста перевода. Несвязность может также стать следствием несогласованности информационной структуры новой последовательности фраз и общей композиции. Кроме того, выявлены контексты, в которых фразовое членение, как правило, нежелательно по прагматическим соображениям.
Ключевые слова: фразовое членение, связность, текстовые отношения, обучение переводчиков, корпус несовершенных переводов.
